This is a first of its kind in the site, and it’s still experimental. Red mentioned that perhaps more of us could share prose or poetry about freethought, so here goes my first dive into this mess 🙂
Mothers
Mother, you bid to bathe me with boon, and still you do
Try, for you feel it’s your responsibility to.
You’ve sacrificed, and supplied me with sustenance
There was a time, I remember, when our parlance
Were very much attuned to each other’s ideas and thoughts
But then I studied and grew, and I think you see it was not for nought.
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Mother, you never really showered us such spirituality as
Father did; he would try to preach the Bible from start till last.
Yet still you required religious reverence, relished it if you will
You believed in heaven and hell, Adam and Eve, and of course good and evil
As a child, I believed those, and I still remember believing them too
I was a victim of it all, indoctrination, and I think so were you
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Mother of my mother, I’ve no doubt you’ve assiduously applied all
Your talent and time to transform this future mother’s mind into a thrall
Do I then blame you for bequeathing this bane? This irrational virus of the mind?
Perhaps so, but you are just a victim as well, in a long chain left behind
By forebears who were perhaps too quick to believe and be converted
From a father and a mother to their sons and daughters, the passing of the virus repeated.
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Mother of my mother, father of my mother, and many of our ancestors
They took pleasure, and so do you I believe, from knowing your errors
Your actions, your thoughts, somebody is watching; Pretty silly if you think about it for a moment
That you take as a rule, Bronze age ideology, instead of actual discernment
Of how things really work, science showing the systematic silk-road to awareness, to evidence
Which luckily, some of our ancestors started, instead of balking in gods and their supposed omniscience
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Motherland, you’ve spuriously spawned spirit satiated sapiens since stone ages
People who cling to quick reaffirmations, even if evidence says the erroneous explanation engages
Not man’s faculty of reason, but his irrationality and will to believe
And if it be so, would it not be possible then, that any lesser man contrive and conceive
Any ludicrous and fanciful mythology, unto his own machinations and whims?
“Of course!” That’s the answer. As Dawkins puts it, those inventions pass on as memes.
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Motherland, how long will ‘heathens’ like me, unto which science and skepticism prevail,
Be beset by bothersome brigands banding together, to remove me from freethinking land from where I hail?
The time of rationality, of science, of constructive skepticism, of evidence seeking, should fill the 21st century
Yet the century is still plagued by, unfortunately, blind and unyielding irrationality
If what religion means is to be awed by our fleeting lives in the vast cosmos, then I’m a religious man
But I would not immediately jump blindly by mere faith, and always reason out if I can.
Quite nicely done.
More please. 🙂
Great poem!
Thanks 😉
that's what approximately 30 or so minutes of procrastination at the lab produced, who would've thought? 🙂
Anyway, I was also inspired by James Randi's video, where he talked about how he misses Carl Sagan, and reminisces some of Carl's most significant contributions to free thinking. Here's the link to the video: http://machineslikeus.com/news/james-randi-talks-…
Who's James Randi? He's the guy who's put up a reward of $1 million dollars to anybody who can display any proof of the paranormal, supernatural etc under a controlled environment.
WOW!
Moving and yet very thought provoking.
Congratulations! Keep them coming 🙂